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The Twinkle In His Eyes

I see him out of the corner of my eye, sitting in a chair in the darkest recess of the room, far enough to not encroach on our personal space. The few meters remind me of some sort of cruel social distancing rule. His pants are in a puddle at his feet; his shirt open, his breath is carefully monitored as his hand grips his cock in a death like choke hold.

I know he can see me there on all fours. Like some bitch in heat. In a way I am. I’m always ready for my man. Something about my Love has me in a constant state of arousal. Our Voyeur has eyes that see. He is watching as my Lover glides effortlessly inside, as my breasts sway from side to side with the rhythm of our play. I can see him appreciate the scene unfolding before him.

My Lover wants to turn me over. I am happy to oblige. He grabs my ass cheeks and my right leg gracefully sweeps around his hip. The muscles in my calf flex and I know our Watcher is observing every move; I point my toes like a dancer as I ride closer to pleasure.

The Voyeur’s hand is stroking his cock now dripping with precum, and murmuring to me under his breath, barely audible but enough for my head to snap out of my dream state and look at him. His eyes are glistening with volumes of pent up desire and my eyes focus on his hand. He asks me if I want it. I laugh internally – why did the fool think he was here? Had he really planned on staying out of it and just watch?

I open my mouth slowly, let my lips part and my white teeth peek through. Half off the bed, I am on my back, my breasts are high and my nipples’ pointing to the ceiling, my Lover is steady and perfectly bringing me to the edge of the abyss. My tongue wets my lips and I open my mouth again. I reach a hand over in the Voyeurs general direction … almost pointing to the cock he is mock waving at me.

I hear my Lover burst out laughing and for a moment the sensuality is lost as we all chuckle. Our guest is suddenly embarrassed. Not for himself but for breaking the code. He interrupted the moment, broke our concentration and the flow. It doesn’t last long, as my Love, still buried deep within me, takes my hair and turns my head towards our guest as he kisses, then bites my neck hard. The sharp and sudden pain is a sweet thrill that makes me gasp. In that moment our invitee breaks his own rules, and slips his cock between my parted, plump lips.

It’s all very fluid and unreal as he fucks me and I mouth fuck him and I grip my love with one hand and our Voyeur with the other. Bodies, fantasies, taboos and time are suspended. I feel the ache of desire pulse deep inside. My eyes close, I breathe with short gasps with a shaft in my mouth to cater to. The feeling of bliss is coming from the work of my Lovers well behaved cock causing the trembling walls of my cunt to hum in a pleasing frenzy. His strong arms and solid body thrill me; the hard muscles of his well-developed thighs feel wonderful against the smoothness of my own legs.

My whole being is swimming under the assaults. The forbidden is such a naughty turn on. I jolt high up hard against the driving rod to welcome it. The cocks are hitting deep as they start to dance out of control, bucking fiercely, plunging my body toward a climax. But I wait. I wait …. wait.

Finally the jizm rises like a phoenix and the screaming members and roaring throats explode in a sea of hot sand and fill the bucking cavity of my cunt and throat. It comes in explosive surges causing my body to rock from head to toe, boiling, steaming eruptions of frothing cream to wet and paint my insides. Soothed at last.

Opening my eyes to the clap of thunder, I roll toward my love grabbing his cock between my naked thighs before he is fully awake. “I just had the most amazing dream“I tell him. The twinkle in his eyes as he turns his head to look at me makes me wonder momentarily.


September 25, 2009 - Posted by | Uncategorized | , , , , , , , , ,


  1. Oh, I like this one very much. It speaks to my own curiosity about what it’d be like for me and my partner have someone else watch us while we’re making love. I really have no idea what the reality would be like but the fantasy is a very hot one.

    — PB

    Comment by The Panserbjørne | September 25, 2009 | Reply

    • Oh Panserbjørn, it’s one of those fantasies that – when I did do it, I was too young to really soak it in. Now, as a more mature lover I am no longer certain I want to actually DO this …. yet the fantasy lingers. It resurfaces in my work. Many of my drafts of late seem to have that theme. I don’t know … is it like my challenge? a fantasy best left in that realm? I don’t know. Plus who the “star guest” would be is … tricky.

      Hope that there aren’t any grammar errors to drive you mad! … I tease … I do appreciate it so feel free to edit and send me that off line.

      Comment by Fantasia Lillith | September 25, 2009 | Reply

      • Nothing major, only minor stuff that doesn’t detract from the narrative flow. 🙂

        — PB

        Comment by The Panserbjørne | September 25, 2009

  2. i love it! very sexy writing. it’s hard to find good erotica that’s not too cheesy. 🙂

    Comment by floreta | September 26, 2009 | Reply

    • Thank you floreta, and welcome! It’s tough I agree! it’s why I started doing my own. Glad you enjoyed it! hope to see you again and thank you for commenting – so few do.

      Comment by Fantasia Lillith | September 26, 2009 | Reply

  3. very nice! well-written and beautiful use of language,as usual!

    Comment by elsiewrites | September 26, 2009 | Reply

    • Why thank you!! I just had this one come out of me … I think in 20 min or so. Then it sat there for weeks and weeks and when I looked at it again it took an hour to “fix”!! go figure.

      Comment by Fantasia Lillith | September 28, 2009 | Reply

  4. Interesting concept. Very “enjoyable” to read, dear Fantasia. I wonder, how this story would change if the voyeur were a woman? 😉

    Comment by Silia | September 27, 2009 | Reply

    • Silia!! good question! …. Hmmmmm…. some good food for thought there.
      I always love your comments they often have a wonderful gold nugget in them. I wonder indeed!!

      Comment by Fantasia Lillith | September 28, 2009 | Reply

  5. “The twinkle in his eyes as he turns his head to look at me makes me wonder momentarily.”

    – my favorite 🙂
    i do wonder what’s behind the twinkle of every lover’s eyes.

    Comment by Asian Butterfly | September 28, 2009 | Reply

  6. I love the words you choose – “pleasing frenzy”; “screaming members and roaring throats”… very, very hot.

    Comment by wifegonebad | September 28, 2009 | Reply

    • Wifegonebad, thank you!! I try. I am terrified of being boring and predictable! never oh please …please… never that!

      Comment by Fantasia Lillith | September 28, 2009 | Reply

  7. Fantasia, I really like this, so erotic and sensual

    Comment by pashun | September 28, 2009 | Reply

    • Awe Pashun!! there you are!! Oh I missed you lady! was wondering where you went. Glad to see you are alright.
      … oh and … thank you!!

      Comment by Fantasia Lillith | September 28, 2009 | Reply

  8. Jiszm…. loved it!! Hot to Trot!!

    Comment by The Levi Store | September 29, 2009 | Reply

  9. I haven’t been around here for a while. It took Silia to bring me back. She whispered to me, I need you in my mouth.
    What, now, how?
    Read Fantasia’s latest, she teased. I want you here and there. You’ll know what I’m talking about once you read, she said.

    Now I know.

    Comment by Thorn | September 30, 2009 | Reply

    • AH the missing has been found!! Thorn … Silia isn’t the only one that wants you here!

      Comment by Fantasia Lillith | September 30, 2009 | Reply

  10. I think I need to do a watercolor of you… panties, or sans panties… thats up to you. 🙂

    Comment by Drop The Jeans | October 1, 2009 | Reply

    • Let me see what I can do … and then what you will do!

      Comment by Fantasia Lillith | October 1, 2009 | Reply

  11. Filthy, debased, hedonistic, and I loved it.

    Surely it’s me in the corner who can’t prevent himself from getting in on the act?
    RR x

    Comment by Road Runner | October 1, 2009 | Reply

    • If that is what you want to play out in your head – then by all means.

      Comment by Fantasia Lillith | October 1, 2009 | Reply

  12. As long as it stays in my head?

    Comment by Road Runner | October 1, 2009 | Reply

  13. I dont smoke, but I think I need a smoke right now.


    Comment by cherokeebydesign | October 9, 2009 | Reply

    • Hope you voted!! glad you enjoyed it … is that a vote for smokedawg?

      Comment by Fantasia Lillith | October 12, 2009 | Reply

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